Who cares about the editing??!!! This book was awesome! I loved every second, every word, every character (A and B), every scene, every kiss, every, every.....sigh. I just wanted to crawl inside this book and be best friends with these people. Rule....dear lord, take my breath away, take me now. Shaw was awesome. This was a story without angst. I will definitely read it again, and I cannot wait until the next one.