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Jennifer Butler

I love to read anything that makes me FEEL SOMETHING. I love to cry. I love to laugh. I love to scream. Mostly, I love to love. 

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The Lonely
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The Lonely
Tara Brown
Unscrupulous (The Manhattanites, #2) - Avery Aster 2 LET-ME-TELL-YOU-WHY STARSReason #3:The plot.Ms. Aster, you need a new editor…like, say…ME. If you would have given me this book, I would have given it back to you and said, “This book has no plot.” And then I would have chopped it in half. But I would also say, “I know you can do better than this.” There is something inside of you that needs to be exposed, and I’m not talking about your vajayjay. There is so much potential to a book like this because I can see how unique it could be.Sure, you’ve got a 4 star average rating on this book, but I know you can do better.Reason #2:The characters. Who are these people?!? Do you know who they are Ms. Aster?? I couldn’t get a picture of them. Was Warner hot? Yes. But I’ve read hotter. He was just ok. I wanted to love these characters. I found myself leaning into my kindle waiting for something amazing to pop out about these characters, but nothing happened.Reason #1: The feels.I didn’t FEEL anything!!! Sure. I get it. This is supposed to be a fun, funny, book. But I felt like Ms. Aster wanted me to feel something, whether it be a connection with the friendship between the 3 girlfriends, for the sad pasts of any of the characters…but I wasn’t buying what Ms. Aster was selling. You don’t have to create crazy drama to get me to feel something. You just need to SELL your story and your characters. Make me like them. Pull me into your head, into your book and don’t let me leave until you let me.Did I smile? Yes. Did I laugh? Yes. Was the sex hot? Yes. I didn’t love it. I didn’t hate it. I was just….ok.ARC provided by the author via Netgalley for an honest review